redundantly ([info]redundantly) wrote,
@ 2006-01-31 23:36:00
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Drabble!
So, I sat down to write. While I did, it wasn't at all what I meant to work on. Instead, I've a short 131 word drabble. Oops, in the best way.

Title: Mental Lists
Author: [info]redundantly
Word Count: 131
Rating: G
Pairing: Wes/Gunn
Summary: Since age six, Wesley had kept a mental list of his failures.

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Since age six, Wesley had kept a mental list of his failures. There were the small ones (scorching Father's study after the mistranslation of a spell) and the big ones (Faith), and he kept track of them all.

He wasn't sure just which category his kissing Gunn fell into.

Gunn wiped at his mouth, shifting slightly. "Remind me of this moment the next time I call you predictable."

Wesley looked away. "Charles, I didn't--"

"Mean to?" Gunn snorted. "Wes, you held me against the wall. In fact," he glanced down at the hands gripping his shoulders, keeping him in place, "You still are."

Quickly, Wesley dropped his arms, stepping back. "I'm sorry. I-- I shouldn't have--"

"Hey," Gunn shrugged, "I ain't moving, am I?"

His mental lists were far too limiting.

***

Constructive criticism always welcome.

Work and the real world have been winning, lately. Of course, I've also been completely distracted by AtS and BtVS, so it's mostly my fault. Just a formal apology for failing at livejournal and fandom.



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[info]devadevin
2006-02-01 12:34 pm UTC (link)
Whoo! Brokeback Syndrome anyone? LOL.

Not usually into slash or as I call it: man to man hot steamy kissage eww that gross thing fangirls do. So the only comment I can leave for this is, well, you stayed believably into canon. If that scenario really did happen in the show, Gunn would've definitely said that.

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[info]redundantly
2006-02-01 03:10 pm UTC (link)
Well, I'm glad I had a bit to do with getting you to read something you normally wouldn't.

Thanks for the comment -- I'm beaming.

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[info]rayne_y_daze
2006-02-01 05:32 pm UTC (link)
Oh, very nice! I love Wes/Gunn :-)

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[info]eiretamicha
2008-01-07 01:05 am UTC (link)
Hi there. I saw your post in the naturalliving community, and I responded, but then the post was deleted. I want to apologize for the way people were treating you there. All the members are not like that. If you still need help with this issue, please email me at:

eiretamicha AT yahoo DOT ie

I hope everything works out. ♥

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[info]redundantly
2008-01-07 01:49 am UTC (link)
Thank you much for all your kind words-- nice to know not everyone over there was completely rude and unhelpful.

I did get a lot of helpful suggestions that I'll be following.

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(Anonymous)
2008-12-06 10:56 pm UTC (link)
So, wait now. Everyone was completely rude and unhelpful BUT you did get a lot of helpful suggestions you will be following? How does that work exactly?

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(Anonymous)
2008-08-24 04:39 am UTC (link)
Hello there, racist failure douchebag from customer_suck.

So, how's it going with all of your ignorant rasicsm against "orientals"? Still going well?

Or are you still pissed off that those "goldfish-tending sandal-wearing asians" like myself that you whine about and apparently hate so much aren't giving you 6 dollar tips?

Either way, go fuck yourself, asshole. I hope an asian kicks your ass next time you spew derogatory comments online like the retard that you are, next time.

Although I'm sure you're scared because you probably believe they all know martial arts and summon dragons out of their hands, judging by your hateful stupidity in your post.

Rasict fucks like you are what make the world suck. Go fucking kill yourself. I hope you burn in hell, you insensitive piece of shit.

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(Anonymous)
2009-01-04 04:58 am UTC (link)
sup chink

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2008-10-17 01:29 am UTC (link)
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